Sunday 3 May 2009

Unlocked

Watching 
The water
Fathoms
So deep
Cold
Otherworldly
Destination
Unknown
- - - -
Watching
The skyline
Concrete
Metal 
Glass
Not ugly
Industrial
Operatic
- - - -
Watching
The horizon
Clouds
Sky
Sunshine
Meeting
In silence
As one
- - - - 
Watching
The breeze
In motion
In prayer
Changing
Direction
Painting
The heavens
- - - -
Watching
The words
Unspoken
Transparent
Transcending
Time 
Space
People
- - - -
Watching
The boy
In silence
These eyes
Innocent
These thoughts
So true
Friend
- - - -
Watching
The day
Pass
Slow motion
Doors
Lay open
Unlocked
No keys

I need inspiration to write poetry, today has been full of it, that's why this poem was born. It was so easy to write, it's just the story of today, the story of spending time together at Salford Quays. What a wonderful place, it reminds me of an oasis - a place of quiet, of peace, of tranquility in a big, bustling city. Just a place of such contradiction, the mix of water and beauty surrounded by concrete and glass. 
It's a place where you can't help but look and take notice; my eyes just open wide, watching, admiring taking photographs for the mind. Watching someone in particular, just so pure - that's what the penultimate verse is about - a boy, my friend.  The final verse, well it brings it all together, The Quays are mentioned abstractly along with my mindset, so open and honest. Spending time with someone special leaves me with no fear - leaves my door unlocked; that's the title of the poem, Unlocked. It's been a great day xxxxxxx.

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